Please proofread Liam s diary entry and make any necessary corrections. Rephrased Text: Please review and make
Please proofread Liam"s diary entry and make any necessary corrections.
Rephrased Text:
Please review and make any needed corrections to Liam"s diary entry from October 14th. On this day, Liam, Lily, Daisy, Jake, and I went hiking. Our teacher, Mr. Loft, instructed us to set up our tents before it got dark. Jake went to gather firewood for the campfire. However, Lily received a text message and we all reminded her to refrain from using her mobile phone. We encountered a problem when trying to light the campfire as we realized that the firewood was dry. Daisy became upset because we couldn"t cook anything. Fortunately, Lily came up with an idea and ordered some pizza. This made everyone happy.
Rephrased Text:
Please review and make any needed corrections to Liam"s diary entry from October 14th. On this day, Liam, Lily, Daisy, Jake, and I went hiking. Our teacher, Mr. Loft, instructed us to set up our tents before it got dark. Jake went to gather firewood for the campfire. However, Lily received a text message and we all reminded her to refrain from using her mobile phone. We encountered a problem when trying to light the campfire as we realized that the firewood was dry. Daisy became upset because we couldn"t cook anything. Fortunately, Lily came up with an idea and ordered some pizza. This made everyone happy.
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Пожалуйста, прокомментируйте и внесите необходимые исправления в запись дневника Лиама от 14 октября. В этот день Лиам, Лили, Дейзи, Джейк и я пошли в поход. Наш учитель, мистер Лофт, поручил нам расположить палатки, пока не смутнеет. Джейк отправился собирать дрова для костра. Однако Лили получила сообщение на свой мобильный телефон, и мы все напомнили ей воздержаться от его использования. У нас возникла проблема при попытке разжечь костер, так как мы поняли, что дрова слишком сухие. Дейзи расстроилась, потому что мы не могли