What is the issue with these sentences? Locate and rectify the errors. The March of the Scarecrows is a large food

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What is the issue with these sentences? Locate and rectify the errors. The March of the Scarecrows is a large food battle that has been a longstanding tradition in Valencia since approximately 1945. At the conclusion of the Maslenitsa carnival week, there is always a significant bonfire to welcome the arrival of summer. The night sky explodes with color during the commencement of a cooking competition. For Maslenitsa, all festival-goers consume tomatoes. If you participate in Splatfest, you must raise funds for a local charity. Each year on October 6th, the central market square in Brussels becomes crowded with sculptures made out of sand
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В данном случае есть несколько ошибок в предложениях:

1. В предложении "The March of the Scarecrows is a large food battle that has been a longstanding tradition in Valencia since approximately 1945." ошибка в слове "battle". Вероятно, имелось в виду "festival" или "event". Правильно будет: "The March of the Scarecrows is a large food festival that has been a longstanding tradition in Valencia since approximately 1945."

2. В предложении "At the conclusion of the Maslenitsa carnival week, there is always a significant bonfire to welcome the arrival of summer." тоже есть ошибка. Она связана со словом "bonfire". Правильно будет "bonfire" заменить на "burning of effigies": "At the conclusion of the Maslenitsa carnival week, there is always a significant burning of effigies to welcome the arrival of summer."

3. В предложении "The night sky explodes with color during the commencement of a cooking competition." имеется ошибка в слове "commencement". Вероятно, вместо этого следует использовать слово "start": "The night sky explodes with color at the start of a cooking competition."

4. В предложении "For Maslenitsa, all festival-goers consume tomatoes." ошибка в том, что во время Масленицы не все участники фестиваля потребляют помидоры. Вероятно, автором было имелось в виду, что участники фестиваля бросают помидоры друг в друга. Однако, в данном предложении это неясно. Чтобы исправить это, можно сказать, например: "During Maslenitsa, festival-goers engage in a tomato-throwing tradition."

5. Предложение "If you participate in Splatfest, you must raise funds for a local charity." является корректным и не содержит ошибок.

6. Предложение "Each year on October 6th, the central market square in Brussels" не является полным предложением и не имеет окончания. Для исправления этой ошибки, можно добавить дополнительные слова или фразу. Например: "Each year on October 6th, the central market square in Brussels hosts a vibrant autumn festival."

Итак, исправленные предложения выглядят следующим образом:

1. The March of the Scarecrows is a large food festival that has been a longstanding tradition in Valencia since approximately 1945.
2. At the conclusion of the Maslenitsa carnival week, there is always a significant burning of effigies to welcome the arrival of summer.
3. The night sky explodes with color at the start of a cooking competition.
4. During Maslenitsa, festival-goers engage in a tomato-throwing tradition.
5. If you participate in Splatfest, you must raise funds for a local charity.
6. Each year on October 6th, the central market square in Brussels hosts a vibrant autumn festival.